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#1 2002-12-19 6:19 am
The Unborn - The Dream
Here's a track with a bit of american heritage. Hope you like it and if not, don't be affraid to give your opinion. I'm all ears 
--> http://users.pandora.be/jdma/rewind/unborn/TheDream.mp3
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#2 2002-12-19 7:10 am
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Re: The Unborn - The Dream
I voted no because:
Just like the track 'Sugar daddy' in the Life session - repetative sound clips of voices get on my nerve - so the ' I have a dream ' chant gets to be, well, repetative for my tastes. Also, the main sound (lead synth sound?) at roughly 3 minutes 50 seconds to 4 minutes 50 seconds sounded a bit flat at first for my ears, I've gotten used to it after listening through a few times.
I DO like the main beats and the piano - synth parts. Also both the intro and conclusion were done well.
Final conclusion : chop 2 minutes out (2:50 to 4:50) and it would be a great track imo
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#3 2002-12-20 8:48 pm
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Re: The Unborn - The Dream
I voted yes, but I want to clarify. I like the song over all, but there are so many other quotes that could spice it up a bit more for the cerebral types. I'd also try not to limit it to just the one person's quote.
On the other hand, you could go totally the other way with this and juxtapose wacky stuff in it so folks can have a really good think/laugh if they're not dancers ( 
yeah, we exist 
).
Any/all of the public gaffs of our current brain dead president would make for an interesting counter point to the music.
just my tiny little opinions...
...and watch out for the flying meat!
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#4 2002-12-20 10:15 pm
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Re: The Unborn - The Dream
maybe it's good, but all it says is "I have a dream". The background sound has a razer type feel to it (don't ask me to explain that).
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#5 2002-12-21 10:09 pm
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Re: The Unborn - The Dream
umm.. i really wanted to vote yes, but the "razor" like noise in the background gives me a headache.
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